Dear Diary, ( Rainy Day)
Today I wake up at 7:30, because I need to go to school to have a french lesson and art design lesson. I think it is very boring, but I still need to have the lesson, because my mum order me. About 4:30, Alsace and I go to our neighborhood to take photo for our geography project. At night, my family and I go to have a dinner at a hot pot restaurant. But I am confusing why my parent bring me to eat hot pot in the summer. However, although now is in summer, but the food are delicious. Today, I feel happy.
Brenda
12 the April,2008
1 comment:
Brenda, your first entry, in fact, is better written than your second; does that mean that your writing is, "going downhill?" You write coherent sentences, with full-stops here, but in your second entry, everything becomes a mess. Is this a matter of awareness and concentration?
Perhaps it is, because you are still using the present tense to talk about the past!
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