Dear Dairy, ( Sunny Day)
Today I wake up at 10:00, it is very late, because I am very tired. After I finish my breakfast, I do my English homework. My parent take me to Junk Bay and go to the Tai Wan food festival, because the shopping mall invent the whole street to Hong Kong. The food are very famous. This is one of my unforgotten day.
1 comment:
Brenda, it was a sunny day, yet your present - or infinitive - tense clouds your writing. Try writing sentences in the past!
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